Friday, July 24, 2020
The hedge hog
As the mystic creature romed threw the forest it heard a sound. Whats that the creature said to himself. Its a giant he said. Wait a minut its a human. As the human cupped as she thought to be a furousios animal in her hands the creature curled up into a little ball. Its ok I thought that you were a spiky,scary creature but it turns out ur just a cute little hedge hog. Then the spiky animal felt some what warm and comforted.
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Hi Samara, I really like the describing words you have used for the spiky, cute, hedgehog. Great writing. Remember to check for full stops and capital letters when you post to your blog.
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