Down In The Ocean
One day I decided to go for a dive in the ocean wow that looks amazing I said.I could see glowing fish,octipuses with gigantic tentacles Then I noticed something right in the middle it was a abandonde shipreck.I wonder whos that boat was it seemed like a pirate boat you would only see in movies or in books.I decided to go have a look at it inside was a tresure chest so i tried to open it but it wouldnt budge.I saw a key but it was on a stand for some reason then i grabed it but the ship started to crumble down boom it had calapesd so i swam to the surfece and to this day i woder whos ship that was and why it suddenly calapsed.
KIA ORA! Samara I really like the story. The words you used made it sound better and made it interesting. When you used the word collapse it gave me a picture in my head. Next time you could say what happened at the end of the story but other than that you did a amazing job!
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